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Devotional: Grandma’s Christmas Visit

December 17th, 2010

After you’ve heard “Grandma’s Christmas Visit,” check out this devotional thought. (If you haven’t heard the episode, check out the Media Player. You can also find a station in your area.)
Birthday Cake

By Ashley Padgett

Listening to “Grandmas Christmas Visit” made me think of some of my own family’s favorite Christmas traditions. On Christmas Day, my family always has a traditional Christmas dinner of…pizza. Why pizza? I don’t know. It’s not very Christmasy, but that’s what we do.

After pepperoni and sausage, my mom pulls out a Jesus Birthday Cake and we sing Happy Birthday to Jesus. Then we kids blow out the candles. Of course, we only have a few candles, since over 2000 is a few too many to fit on one cake!

Even though it’s a small tradition, it was always very special to me because it reminds me that—even with all the lights and presents and parties and food—the true reason for Christmas is the birth Jesus, the person who was there when the world was created and the one who can save us from our sins.

Traditions can create great family memories. And some traditions can help us remember why we celebrate! I think it’s great how Grandma Lucia’s tradition of ¬¬Las Posadas acted as a reminder of the true story of Christmas.

What are some Christmas traditions you celebrate with your family? Are there any traditions you learned from your grandparents? How did they celebrate Christmas differently when they were children than you do today? Tell us all about it here!

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142 Comments on “Devotional: Grandma’s Christmas Visit”

  • joanne on December 18th, 2010 - 8:17am

     

    My family tradition is that we have a Christmas get-together with our relatives and friends


  • joanne on December 18th, 2010 - 8:18am

     

    My family tradition is that we have a Christmas get-together with our relatives and friends.


  • mael on December 18th, 2010 - 8:43am

     

    It’s not letting me listen!


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 9:29am

     

    Grandma’s Christmas Visit Review Part 1

    Well, it’s the final episode, an episode many of us fans dread. Waugh! No more new episodes! However, here is my review of this final episode…

    Well, it was good to have another christmas episode, as we haven’t had any since “Btv: Redeeming the Season”. This episode was fun and interesting, though there was nothing especially memorable about it. It’s an okay episode, but there was nothing that really made me go “Wow, that’s funny,” or laugh out loud…


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 9:32am

     

    Grandma’s Christmas Visit Review Part 2

    There were also several parts that i found kind of disrespectful. When Matthew pointed out that Jesus wasn’t particularly “Awe-Some”, that kind of turned me off. Jesus WAS awesome, in every single way. Also, when Mrs. Ortega (or Mama Lucia, or Abuelita, or Nana, or Lucia) said “oh, i had a lot of practice with my husband…” it didn’t seem particularly respectful. This episode was a decent episode. There were some fun parts, like the game show. I have…


  • E on December 18th, 2010 - 9:34am

     

    It won’t let me listen to Grandma’s Christmas Visit. It says error file not found.


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 9:35am

     

    Grandma’s Christmas Visit Review Part 3

    Seen “Let’s make a deal” before, and thought this was an interesting spoof of it. I liked how everything seemed to get bigger and bigger throughout the episode, and I thought Connie was funny yelling through her megaphone.

    This is definitely worth a listen and it’s a nice Christmas episode, but it’s not necessarily in my top 100. Enjoy it, and have fun listening to the final episode in Album 52.


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 9:37am

     

    Grandma’s Christmas Visit Pros and Cons

    Pros:

    -Christmas episode!!!

    -Let’s Make a White Elephant Exchange

    -”Barn” scent in the fog machine

    Cons:

    -Few disrespectful moments

    -Nothing particularly memorable

    -Last episode of the season! :-(


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 9:40am

     

    Album 52 Overall Review Part 1

    Well, when i first got hold of the album i was very excited, but there was still a part of me that was saying, “but it’s not the old odyssey”. I was expecting episodes of the same quality as “Take it from the Top” which wasn’t that great. I was pleasantly surprised to hear the better quality from sound designing to writing in this album, as it was much improved from 51. I still have my few things i didn’t like about the season, ll the new characters, too many…


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 9:44am

     

    Album 52 Overall Review part 2

    mystery episodes, too few kid characters, and also one nit-picky thing i didn’t like in Stage Fright. Emily has a cell phone?!? Really, she’s what, 12? Does she need a cell phone?

    Sorry… that’s a thing with me

    But, there are also some good things about this season, Wooton’s own radio show, Thankstaking Story, etc. Also, I watched the movie “Santa Claus is Comin’ to Town” last night, and there was a cranky old mayor in it named Burgermeister Meisterburger…


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 9:49am

     

    Album 52 Overall Review part 3

    So, that gave me a new perspective of Burgerlblitzer Blitzerburger. Anyway, though this album wasn’t as good as previous albums such as 50, 49, 48, etc. it was an okay album, and much improved over Album 51. I would definitely recommend buying this album.


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 9:59am

     

    So how do all twelve episodes stack up on my list? i went on to my itunes to see how many times i had listened to each episode, and I will list them here from most listens to fewest…

    - A Thankstaking Story – Listened to 19 times

    - Wooton’s Broken Pencil Show – 14

    -Square One – 12

    Opposite Day – 10

    Mystery of the Clock tower part 2 – 9

    Stage Fright – 9

    Fast as i can – 9

    The Owlnapping – 8

    Grandma’s Christmas Visit – 8

    Mystery of the Clock tower part 1 – 7


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 10:01am

     

    The Malted Milkball Falcon – 6

    An Agreeable nanny – 3

    What is my favorite episode? Wooton’s Broken Pencil Show

    What is my least favorite episode? Opposite Day

    One last thing i want to leave you with… a preview of album 53…

    It all beings when a small plane crashes under strange circumstances outside town. The mystery deepens when a

    backpack filled with money is found in the woods near Gower’s Field, outside of Odyssey. What does all of this have to do with the Green Ring…


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 18th, 2010 - 10:01am

     

    …Conspiracy? Whit, Eugene, and Connie have to put together the clues before it’s too late to stop a worldwide conspiracy!

    Thanks for reading my reviews! Have a merry Christmas! See you next season!


  • soccer fan on December 18th, 2010 - 2:44pm

     

    Why wont it let me listen it says file not found


  • J.R.C on December 18th, 2010 - 2:45pm

     

    @ Odysseyfan#1
    How did you find out all the stuff about album 53???


  • An AIO fan on December 18th, 2010 - 3:04pm

     

    Oddyseyfan#1,
    how do you know that stuff about album 53?Are you an actor for AIO or something?You sure do listen to the shows a lot.I would think that they would get boring after a while.
    To Oddyesy team:
    I didn’t really like this episode too much.LOTS of yelling.Even from Whit.And there wasn’t many lines for the kids.Connie was pretty annoying.But overall it wasn’t that bad.
    Can’t wait for album 53!


  • J.R.C on December 18th, 2010 - 3:09pm

     

    I can’t listen to it either! Would you please fix it if possible?


  • ODYSSEY ROCK on December 18th, 2010 - 6:55pm

     

    I miss the old odyssey, but hopefully this’ll come along :)


  • HANNAH on December 18th, 2010 - 11:40pm

     

    was it really nessary to put so many comments on here odyssey fan #1 just wondering out of curiosty sorry if you feel afended becouse of somthing i sayed:(


  • Mimi on December 19th, 2010 - 8:28am

     

    HI I am mimi I love a tine for christmas


  • taliax177 on December 19th, 2010 - 10:31am

     

    ROA, please answer this: WHAT STATE DO YOU LIVE IN!

    I thought this episode was OK.


  • oregon girl on December 19th, 2010 - 4:23pm

     

    our familys tradition is to make cookies on christmas eve and then on christmas day we go to several friends houses and deliver the cookies and sing for them


  • HUGE FAN on December 19th, 2010 - 7:16pm

     

    My family tradition on Christmas morning we open gifts and we video tape the whole thing.


  • Joanna on December 19th, 2010 - 10:59pm

     

    Hi Ashley!

    LOVE the Christmas tradition of pizza and Birthday cake for Jesus! I absolutely adore it! And I think the Lord likes it too, because it’s got meaning and not one of those GO THROUGH THE MOTIONS things. That’s how the Lord wants us to thing of our relationship with Him! Fun. Enjoyable, Adventurous and filled with wonderful memories!


  • annabanana on December 20th, 2010 - 9:30am

     

    pizza?????


  • ari on December 20th, 2010 - 11:03am

     

    This episode was interesting. At least Abuelita didn’t make any inappropriate jokes. I think it was an okay finale for a not-so-disappointing album. It wasn’t as bad as I expected. Sorry if I sound like a mile of bad road; AIO just isn’t what it was. I suppose things get like this over time. ‘Tis sad.
    Lady Airwrenhill


  • Brttini on December 20th, 2010 - 11:15am

     

    Merry Christmas everyone!!!!


  • wooton on December 20th, 2010 - 11:29am

     

    I am so sad that album 51 is over:( . when will the next album come out? Cant wait! my sister and I listened to it on the radio and then another 10 times on the computer:)


  • SARAH a on December 20th, 2010 - 3:10pm

     

    This was a pretty good episode.could have been better…It could have been worse.


  • Odysseyfan#1 on December 20th, 2010 - 3:32pm

     

    @JRC, The overview of album 53 was in the album 52 case.

    @AN AIO FAN, As much as i would love to be an actor for Odyssey, I’m just a normal kid. I’m just a HUGE odyssey fan. I don’t really get bored of them. AIO is pretty much my one and only hobby.

    @HANNAH, Yeah, i do post a lot, and I’m not sure if that’s particularly good or not… I just love AIO! (No, I’m not offended. I don’t get offended easily)


  • Maura on December 20th, 2010 - 3:46pm

     

    I love album 52! Way to go odyssey team! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give us a preview of album 53 the green ring conspiracy, I can’t wait! LOVE YOU ODYSSEY!!

    By the way EUGENE ROCKS!! (even if he is a little bit of a know it all!)


  • Maura on December 20th, 2010 - 3:47pm

     

    by the way….

    Merry christmas!!


  • Maura on December 20th, 2010 - 3:47pm

     

    ANd a happy new year!


  • jack on December 20th, 2010 - 4:49pm

     

    This album was pretty good. Emily is my Definite favorite character. The Jones and Parker mysteries are awesome. I really wish Emily would be featured more. She`s my pick for the avery awards. Say, “Go Emily” if
    agree. Odyssey producers: please make the episodes more interesting. The Album 52 episodes in particular stayed
    in one scene too long. Don`t take this the wrong way, but Wooton`s broken Pencil show and opposite day were
    incredibly boring. Also, Barret`s old voice was better,&
    I…


  • jack on December 20th, 2010 - 4:55pm

     

    Don`t really like Olivia`s character or voice. Apologies
    to the actor. p.s. Matthew is great and I`m glad you`re
    featuring Jay, RYAN and Priscilla more. I didn`t think I would
    like these characters as much as I did the old, but I like them much, much more


  • Stier on December 20th, 2010 - 7:16pm

     

    Finally, I get to hear Grandma’s Christmas Visit! I was about to blow up. :)


  • jazmyne on December 20th, 2010 - 8:23pm

     

    iv’e have been heard all of album 51 because i got it from the bible store.


  • sarah on December 20th, 2010 - 8:43pm

     

    it won’t let me listen to it.. it says theres an error!!


  • Odyssyfan#2 on December 21st, 2010 - 10:41am

     

    Well that’s the end of the album[sniff]but there’s always next season. Since I don’t want to copy cat odyssyfan#1′s idea of pros and cons[which are awesome] I will give my reveiw the much longer way.

    The whole album overall was good. But there were deafenateley some silly if not plain wacko episodes[forgive me]. I did not like Opisite day at all. Stage fright wasn’t really good,I mean, it didn’t teach me anything[ was it supposed to]. :( But besides those…


  • Odyssyfan#2 on December 21st, 2010 - 10:43am

     

    I think it played out very well. Can’t wait till Album 53!! :) :) :) :)


  • HUGE FAN on December 21st, 2010 - 11:05am

     

    I cant wait till album 53 comes out!!!!


  • Michelle on December 21st, 2010 - 2:25pm

     

    Good reveiwing ODYSSEYFAN#1.
    Hey can everyone pray for my family?? Something kind of personal happened last year and its still affecting us a lot. :(


  • HANNAH.S on December 21st, 2010 - 5:37pm

     

    it finally let me listen to it;) :) :D :P


  • Maura on December 21st, 2010 - 7:43pm

     

    LOVe YOU ODYSSEY~


  • tALIAX177 on December 21st, 2010 - 8:20pm

     

    @Wooton: Album 52 is the album everyone is talking about. This episode is in album 52. I can’t wait for ALBUM 53!!! :D


  • tALIAX177 on December 21st, 2010 - 8:21pm

     

    *Gasp*! My emote worked! It works on Google Chrome and not Internet Explorer! Awesome! Keep it up AIO!


  • Ryn#1 on December 22nd, 2010 - 8:24am

     

    i really liked it a lot i thought it was great it was so awesome that whit put in matthews song tape that he got a coin and a necklace and in camilla’s she got a 20$ or 25$ dollar gift card to the mall i love odyssey merry christmas and 3 more days until christmas day!


  • kate on December 22nd, 2010 - 10:00am

     

    HI I it wasnt letting me play.


  • ari on December 22nd, 2010 - 4:10pm

     

    GO EMILY!! :) WE LIKE YOU!! :) :)


  • Gabby on December 22nd, 2010 - 6:34pm

     

    I liked album 52 but it didn’t really teach me any lessons like the old odysseys and I agree with “an AIO fan” there was definitely too much yelling in this episode. Also, now I see Eva Parker gripping about her mom alot and I find that disrespectful and she always seems quick to say she’s sorry but it seems like she doesn’t really mean it. All in all this was an ok album i wouldn’t say it was good. (please don’t be offended AIO makers)


  • Whitehorse on December 22nd, 2010 - 10:40pm

     

    This episode was okay, but I miss the old Odyssey.But I LOVED A Thankstaking Story and Wooton’s Broken Pencil Show! They were the best ones in this album. I have only been a AIO fan for about a year, but I’m loving it more every day, and listen to the daily episodes every night. I pretty much agree with Odysseyfan#1, about pretty much everything they said.


  • Whitehorse on December 22nd, 2010 - 10:45pm

     

    And Odysseyfan#1, You do good reviews, I always like reading them. And I will be praying for you Michelle.


  • Stevie on January 7th, 2011 - 7:56pm

     

    Hey ya’ll just want to say a few little things. Some pointers here. For all of you who find the new Odyssey as something that is not as good as the old Odyssey think about this. Imagine if there was no Odyssey. Imagine if all of the people on A.I.O gave up after Paul died. Imagine if they said, “Oh well we lost our main actor who cares what the viewers think we’ll just STOP!” It would be a terrible world without our beloved Odyssey. We would be angry and we would be trying to scrape for any of the old albums. We wouldn’t care what would happen but we would just want to hear those incredible names again, Connie, Eugene, Wooton, and most of all Whit.
    Thankfully they did not stop, they did not give up hope. All of those people who work on Odyssey, they continued to make these radio dramas that we are proud to call Adventures in Odyssey. Please do not deny it, you all know that ya’ll would hate it if there was no Odyssey in the world. Ya’ll know that deep down you are glad that Odyssey is still here.
    If you think about it this way, you learn appreciate Odyssey a lot. I now notice that I love Odyssey much more. I realize that I like this new Odyssey. I love Emily Jones, and Priscilla, and everyone else. I don’t complain about Pete or anyone else. Sure I’d say that they could start doing better themes, more Bible based, and more Imagination Station ones. But now I realized from reading some posts that we all complain a bit too much. I don’t mean to be harsh. But I feel bad for A.I.O. with all of the gripping and groaning we do. I would just like for ya’ll to think about this.
    Goal: Try to say something positive with each post you post :D :P ? ;) and when you give CONSTRUCTIVE critism(s.p) don’t try to make it mean, then again I might be being mean by saying all of this, and just love Odyssey for what it is!
    If you have read this PLEASE say that you have. If I’m being a little harsh let me know please!
    Special thanks to KID who first brought up the idea about what would happen if Whit died, to Odyssey for inspiring me to do the right thing and always believing, and to God my father who taught me to breathe and trust, who always gives me hope, who always is there for me, who I love.
    Stevie C. L. a big, no HUGE fan of Odyssey!


  • Stevie on January 7th, 2011 - 7:56pm

     

    Wow that sure was long sorry for that


  • Stevie on January 7th, 2011 - 8:13pm

     

    Ratings: for 12 being the worst and 1 being the best
    Wooton’s Broken Pencil Show: 12
    Fast as I can:11
    Opposite Day: 10
    Mystery of the clock Tower Pt. 1:9
    Mystery of the Clock Tower Pt. 2:8
    Square One: 7
    Grandma’s Christmas Visit: 6
    An Agreeable Nanny: 5
    A Thankstaking Story: 4
    Stage Fright: 3
    Owl Napping: 2
    The Malted Milkball Falcon: 1
    I don’t want anyone to think that this is something that they need to follow, but I just want to go with my honest opinion. I want to put mine out there. :D


  • Stevie on January 9th, 2011 - 10:40am

     

    You can find out about Album 53 when you purchase album 52. I got it for Christmas! :D
    Stevie


  • debbie on January 9th, 2011 - 3:25pm

     

    Our family tradition is that we wake up at 7:00, read the CHRISTmas story, pray, open presents oldest to youngest, and have a breakfast of cinnamon rolls, and eggnog. Go to my Moms parents then open gifts youngest to oldest. Then we go to my Dads parents and open presents then go home.


  • debbie on January 9th, 2011 - 3:26pm

     

    how do you do those smiley faces


  • Joy on January 9th, 2011 - 6:05pm

     

    Goodness, that cake looks good. : )


  • mike on January 10th, 2011 - 7:56pm

     

    You should make Jason get married because he has been engaged……and you should also make Eugene and Katrina have a baby I mean how long have they been married and they don’t have any kids yet and then Eugene wouldn’t be the last of a long line if you make them have a boy…… you also need to make Mitch come back from Budapest and marry Connie because Connie really needs to get married.


  • debbie on January 10th, 2011 - 7:59pm

     

    ;0
    ;p
    :)
    :(
    :0
    :p
    these are the only way I can do the faces


  • mike on January 10th, 2011 - 8:00pm

     

    :)


  • maygirl on January 11th, 2011 - 7:46pm

     

    Album 52 was awesome! I didn’t really like album 51, but this album was a lot better.


  • #1AIOFan on January 13th, 2011 - 12:42am

     

    Hey Mike, Eugene and Katrina haven’t had a baby yet because the writers would have to change Eugene from a Know-It-All to a father ,and they don’t want to do that . But trust me I would LOVE for them to have a baby.


  • Icarly on January 14th, 2011 - 9:04am

     

    I love this album tell me I am stupid, it is awsome. even now it is pricy it is the besssssssssssssssttttttttt


  • Icarly on January 14th, 2011 - 9:07am

     

    I love edventures in odessy Katrina and Eugene should have a baby girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I mean it I will stop listing if Eugene dose not have a baby girl or boy. So please Katrina have a baby:)


  • ftu on January 14th, 2011 - 2:33pm

     

    Wow, Stevie, I’m impressed! What a long comment you’ve posted! And I agree with you what said. “The Malted Milkball Falcon” is my favorite episode. I love the way all the characters interact with each other.
    FearTheUnknown


  • nardia on January 17th, 2011 - 11:47am

     

    :) B) :* ;* :( :D 3 :P :S AND MANY MORE


  • Stevie on January 18th, 2011 - 12:21am

     

    Yeah um thanks a bunch FTU I tried to say all that a long time ago, but it took a long and i mean LONG time to type luckily this really helps!
    Stevie :D


  • mARY on January 22nd, 2011 - 8:48am

     

    Our family tradition is getting together in differnt places.


  • debbie on January 22nd, 2011 - 4:11pm

     

    I love this story :) ;) :( ;( :O ;O :P ;P B) B(


  • debbie on January 22nd, 2011 - 4:13pm

     

    Hey ICarly I agree that Eugene and Katrina should have a baby though I dont agree that I should stop listening if they don’t


  • angela on January 24th, 2011 - 7:09pm

     

    :) ): ;p


  • angela on January 24th, 2011 - 7:11pm

     

    :) <3


  • Stephanie on January 24th, 2011 - 8:07pm

     

    HA HA! What a cool tradition. Actually, I’ve had pizza for Christmas on several occasions. We also made Jesus a birthday cake a few years back. Guess I have a bit in common with Ashley Padgett. :)


  • Stephanie on January 24th, 2011 - 8:12pm

     

    Totally agree with Mike… Connie and Mitch should get married!


  • Katani on January 26th, 2011 - 7:30pm

     

    It would be cool to see a baby grow up with Eugene as a father. Mini Eugene! :)


  • hannah h on January 26th, 2011 - 8:21pm

     

    is bernard in the new odyssey?


  • JoWaHA on January 26th, 2011 - 8:55pm

     

    ICarly and Debbie!!

    I want Eugene and Katrina to have a baby too!! He/she would be one great genius :)


  • jazmyne on January 27th, 2011 - 6:53pm

     

    what will the last odessey be called


  • i carley on January 27th, 2011 - 7:10pm

     

    hay sam want to hang out at the lobby with lubert


  • sam on January 27th, 2011 - 7:35pm

     

    weirdo


  • abbie on January 27th, 2011 - 7:38pm

     

    every christmas are gradma comes over i love this one


  • SAM on January 28th, 2011 - 12:44pm

     

    HI I MISS THE OLD WHIT HE WAS THE BEST!!! I CANT LISTEN TO THE KNEW ONES ITS NOT THE SAME ANYMORE..:((


  • SAM on January 28th, 2011 - 12:44pm

     

    CONNEY + MITCH = <3

    MARRIE MARRIE MARRIE MARRIE


  • SAM on January 28th, 2011 - 12:45pm

     

    MITCH SHOULD COME BACK APOLAGISE AND SEE CONNEY AGAIN…


  • SAM on January 28th, 2011 - 12:45pm

     

    CONNEY U DA BEST !!!!


  • Stevie on February 1st, 2011 - 9:36pm

     

    Fans and Friends of Odyssey, Greetings and Salutations! I have just returned from a practice inwhich we use a round sphere and pass it up and down the rectagular floor that has lines painted to mark the perimeter and bountries. I have managed to launch that sphere into the invisible force around us which keeps us living and into the watcha call net and scor a watcha call three pointer. I am a watcha call it a lover of the watcha call sport. I like the watcha call feelin of watcha call running.


  • Stevie on February 3rd, 2011 - 8:18pm

     

    Hey notice that one day the posting is going like super fast and then it just dies down. Uhg I hate it when that happens. Please fix it.


  • mael on February 6th, 2011 - 1:21pm

     

    Jay Smouse is my favorite, I like Barett and Emily too.


  • mael on February 6th, 2011 - 1:24pm

     

    you know how on the podcast,they said something about something that is on the podcast, well maybe thats it!


  • mariah on February 7th, 2011 - 9:08pm

     

    Aw! That is a really nice Christmas tradition! Our family does a lot of visiting on Christmas. It’s fun, entertaining, and a time when all of our immediate family, about 30, get together to celebrate the birth of Jesus!!


  • valerie on March 14th, 2011 - 4:21pm

     

    I like odyssey ALOT we have 46 volumes and I wish I had more
    my sister and I listen to them all most every day. But don’t make them so fast that I can’t buy all of them :) . I listen to all the episodes more then four times a year. some of the people I know think its cheesey,and alot of them have never heard of it. But I love them! and I’m getting my little sister as iterested as I am in them.


  • ALAYNA on March 15th, 2011 - 5:56pm

     

    I LOVE ODYSSEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOO FUN!
    ME AND MY BIG SISTER LISTEN TO IT A LOT!
    WE JUST BOUGHT THE VOLUME CAUSE AND EFFECT IT IS SOOO COOL
    I LIKE THE EPISODE STAGE FRIGHT:)


  • Alexandria on April 7th, 2011 - 8:40am

     

    Next Christmas will be a sad reminder for me,cause this last Christmas eve,my grandpa had a heart attack and stroke before we were gonna vist him.And he died the day after Christmas.I miss him alot, but I know he’s at a better place


  • connie on June 9th, 2011 - 3:07pm

     

    stevvie you are sooo smart i was going to post somting similar to what you said but you got to it first


  • REbecca on June 13th, 2011 - 10:24pm

     

    I thing this episode was great! :)


  • jmp on September 7th, 2012 - 7:26pm

     

    @ Stevie
    Amen

    JMP = The Mighty Christian
    For Narnia , & For Aslan


  • hannah on October 2nd, 2012 - 5:24pm

     

    i havent listend to volume 52 ive enjoyed adventures in odyessy from volume one through 55 i have volumes in diffrint orders but its probely going to be awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 12:57pm

     

    Here we go…

    …“Tanni! Tanni, wake up!”
    It’s Mason’s voice calling me, and I struggle to answer. But my mouth feels dry, and I can’t move.
    “Tanni, wake up! Please!”
    I feel his hand shaking my shoulder. I roll a little, feeling the bounce of a moving vehicle, and realize I’m in the truck. I failed to get free, and I’m still a prisoner.
    “Tanni!” He brushes my hair back from my face and rubs my forehead. I groan, just enough to let him know I’m awake. He sighs with relief.
    “I thought you were a goner there.”
    I give a half-smile and whisper, “I thought I was a goner, too.”


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 12:58pm

     

    We fall silent, listening to the hum of the wheels against the pavement and the whistle of the wind outside. We’re moving pretty fast, from what I can tell. I wonder where we’re going and what’s going to happen to us. I feel bad for getting Mason into this. It’s me Marshall wanted; Mason is just a hanger-on, in a sense.
    A shiver runs through me as I recall the events of the pass few hours. I had no idea things were going to get this bad. I wonder what Lloyd and Jonas are going to think when I don’t show up; and the other loaders at the dock are going to know something’s up.
    Right?


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 12:58pm

     

    I sigh softly. Naomi will know something, I’m sure of it. She’ll get the others to help, and they’ll find us eventually. I just hope eventually is long enough.
    “Mason?”
    “Yeah?”
    “How long have I been out?”
    He sighs. “Thirty minutes, maybe an hour. Not long.”
    “That means Ben and Ally will be looking for me now,” I say quietly.
    “Don’t say that, Tanni. It’ll make you cry.”
    “I’m already crying,” I sniff. I realize my hand is stinging from the cuts, and there’s a sharp pain in my side. I don’t feel like the strong one at all right now, with tears starting to run down my cheeks and my throat closing up.
    “Tanni, don’t.” Mason squeezes my shoulder. “We’ll be okay.”
    “Mason, how can you say that?” I choke out. “We’ve been kidnapped by one of our own—by a human—and now we’re heading to who-knows-where—and—and—” my voice breaks entirely and I turn my face away, letting the tears come. I don’t hide them from Mason, and even if I wanted to, I couldn’t. My head is laying in his lap, and he gently brushes my hair back again and lets me cry.


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 12:59pm

     

    When I calm down, I wipe my eyes and sit up. The light outside the window is slowly fading. This is when I’d be sitting on the roof, watching the Unknown. This is when I’d be looking forward to meeting with the pack at Naomi’s and joking around. Now none of that is going to happen.
    “Mason, we have to get out of here!” I bolt to my feet and stumble from the swaying movement of the truck.
    “Tanni, calm down.” He stands and steadies me. “We’re gonna get out of here. Somehow.”
    I don’t think so, but I nod anyway. We sit down with our backs to the wall, swaying and bouncing with the movement of the vehicle. We’re going pretty fast, I realize. Wherever we’re headed, we’re bound to be there soon.


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 12:59pm

     

    “I wonder where we are right now,” I say, gingerly inspecting my cut-up hand. The bleeding’s stopped, but it still hurts. I wonder if there’s glass imbedded in it. Ouch.
    “We’ve been moving in the circles. I think we’re almost out of Slum 14#, on the inner side.” Mason brushes curly blond hair out of his eyes.
    “That would be…Slum 4#,” I mentally calculate. “Doesn’t Slum 4# border Wandrevir?”
    “The capitol? I hope we aren’t going there!” he exclaims.
    I know what he means. Out in a border-slum, we hear weird stories about Wandrevir. It’s heavily populated by Unba, unlike any of the slums. And Unba don’t like humans in their city. If we’re going there—there’s bad news ahead.


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 12:59pm

     

    “Your hand is all bloody,” Mason points out.
    I nod, grimacing a little. “It hurts like the ices. I hope there’s somewhere I can bandage it up soon.”
    “Here.” He rips some of his shirt tail off and wraps it around and around the cuts, snug but not tight. “That should help it some.”
    “Thanks.” I smile at him, but I don’t feel it. I feel depressed instead. “We have to get out of here.”
    “I know.” He leans back and closes his eyes. “But there’s no way to do it now.”
    “So we sleep on it?” I ask, almost not believing my ears.
    “Look at it this way,” he says. “We’ll need the strength—wherever we’re headed.”
    “Yeah, right.” I lean back and close my eyes. We rest our heads against each other and resign ourselves to the jolt and bounce of the truck against our bones. I don’t think I’m tired, but after a while the darkening around me takes effect and I drop off.


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 1:01pm

     

    Mason moves to sit next to me. “Tanni, do you think we’re going to die?” he asks point-blank.
    I flinch. “Why do you wanna know that?”
    “Because—I think I know where we’re going.”
    “Where?”
    “I heard rumors about stuff like this happening,” he begins cautiously. “People just don’t disappear and no one notices. The girl who lived across from my aunt’s, vanished one day. Her parents, too. I haven’t seem them since. I asked my aunt, but she said there were some things not worth repeating about the Unba. Now I wish I had kept asking. And there were others…” his voice trails off.


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 1:02pm

     

    I lean back against the cold metal of the truck. Outside, the sky is dark, about 7 o’clock, I figure. We’ve been in here for three hours. The pack will know something is wrong—they’ll be looking for me and Mason. Lloyd and Jonas are probably frantic by now. But the slum gates are going to close soon. I wonder how they will get past those to continue the search.
    “We’re slowing down,” Mason says quietly. We both hop up and peer out the window, trying to figure out where we are. Bright street lights and swooping hover cars and chariots meet our eyes. It’s a big city, we can tell.
    A city?
    “Wandrevir,” we both say slowly, fear chilling our bones.
    “It’s easy to get lost in a big city,” I say. “Who would notice if we just…disappeared?
    “We already have,” he responds. “No one will know where we are.”


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 1:02pm

     

    I understand and sigh. But I can’t say anything. What’s there to say that hasn’t already been said? I sit down again, but Mason remains at the window. He’s taking everything in; and that gives me an idea.
    “When they open the door to get us, you should run for it.”
    He turns to look at me. “And go where?”
    “Lose yourself. Try to get back home. Tell the others.”
    “But—what about you?” He sits down next to me.
    “I don’t know. But it’s better than both of us disappearing without a trace. At least you can tell them what happened to me.”
    “No, I’m not leaving you,” he states firmly. “You don’t know what could happen to you here. What Marshall could do to you.”
    “Mason, if both of us are gone, we have no hope. But if you go and tell the others, there’s a chance you could come back for me.”
    “I don’t take chances.” He looks me in the eye. “I’m staying with you, Tannith Drifess. No matter what happens, I’m going to protect you.”


  • ftu on December 16th, 2012 - 1:03pm

     

    I scowl. I want him to go back. But deep inside, I’m relieved he won’t. So I smile and wrap an arm around his shoulder and squeeze him. He blushes and pulls away and we laugh, a little shyly, but knowing that we’re good friends.
    We both crowd back to the window, watching the traffic go by. I stare in awe at the chariots, flying scooters I’ve heard of but never before seen. Mason is excited about the bright streets-lights and tall sky-scrapers. Nothing like them exist in the slums. For a moment, we almost forget we’re prisoners of the Unba, on our way to an unknown destination.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:10pm

     

    This paragraph goes between 12:59pm and 1:01pm: Even in my dreams, I feel the urgency to free myself. I’m running through the streets of Slum 22#. The sky is dark overhead, but the streets are red-lit. Sirens are wailing in the background; Unba sirens, which means the patrols are on extra duty. They’re looking for me, I know. I want to get to my building and hide on the roof. As I run, I see Lloyd and Jonas burst from a doorway, pursued by soldiers. I shout for them to join me, but they’re grabbed and hauled away. I suddenly realize I am on my rooftop, looking down into the street and watching. More soldiers are climbing up the fire-escape, shooting blue electricity from their guns (this is a dream, after all). I hear Ben and Ally calling for me to rescue them from the fire in our apartment, because the A/C broke down. When I try to move, my feet feel frozen to the ground. I watch in horror as the soldiers pour onto the roof, surrounding me. But at the last moment, as their hands grab me and start to pull me away, I look off toward the Unknown. And there, barely visible at the edge of the horizon, is my dad. He’s running toward me. Hope surges through me.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:11pm

     

    This paragraph goes between 12:59pm and 1:01pm: I bolt up, shouting, “Dad!”
    The rumble of the truck answers me.
    It’s just a dream.
    I sink down, still feeling the hope and adrenaline from my dream. Next to me, Mason is laying on his back, staring up at the roof. He looks at me sympathetically.
    “Just a dream,” I mumble, rubbing my eyes. Depression replaces my hope.
    “Yeah, I know.” He sits up and stretches. “I dreamed my parents were still alive and that my dad bashed through the back of the truck.”
    Then I sigh. “I just hope Naomi and the others figure things out soon. Maybe they’re already on their way to help us.”


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:12pm

     

    We plunge suddenly into darkness and the truck rattles violently. For a moment, I’m afraid we’re going to shake apart. Then we break into the light again, a dim, dreary kind of electric light. The truck stops and the engine cuts out. We realize with thumping hearts that we’ve arrived at—wherever it is. Some place that I have the distinct feeling I’m going to want to run away from before I even get inside.
    We instinctively back away from the door as footsteps approach. My uninjured hand finds it’s way into Mason’s. He’s shaking with fear, I can tell. My own body is trembling, my legs and arms columns of jelly. We have no way of knowing what’s ahead for us.
    The door is yanked open and bright light pours in. I wince back and shield my eyes. Marshall is standing in front of us. Behind him, several men and one woman are waiting.
    “Come on, you two, time to get moving,” Marshall says.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:12pm

     

    Mason and I step forward as one, our hands tightly clasped together. Marshall grabs my other hand, the injured one, and yanks us out. I stifle a cry of pain as my feet hit the hard concrete below. Mason stumbles but I keep him from falling. We’re feeling very vulnerable at this point. I give our surroundings a frightened glance; we’re standing in a wide courtyard with night sky above us. Lights are shining in our faces. There is a building in front of us, and around us stand the other people, Unba in civilian uniforms. One of them totes a pistol, but they are otherwise unarmed. I get an uneasy feeling from those looks on their faces.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:12pm

     

    “The new shipments?” The woman looks at us critically. “I thought we were getting only the girl.”
    “The boy saw too much,” Marshall explains. “Make sure he’s finished.”
    “I see.” The man with the pistol nods. “Well, get them into the compound. You know the routine.” He motions to his cohorts, who step forward. The woman grabs me and a man grabs Mason. They pull us apart and keep our arms behind us. My fingers throb from the tight grip.
    “Oh, by the way, a little extra for your trouble,” the armed man says to Marshall. He hands him a small case. “Don’t spend it all in one place.”
    “No worries,” Marshall smiles. Then he looks at me. “Enjoy yourself here, Tanni. It might be the last time you do.”
    “You’re not getting away with this,” I say, surprised by my own boldness.
    He laughs. “Prove it and I’ll believe it.” He walks to the truck and gets in. It drives away, leaving Mason and I completely alone with the Unba. No one can stop what they’re going to do to us now.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:13pm

     

    I look over at Mason. His eyes are wide with fear. I know I look the same way. Blood is pounding through my head and wrists, trembling in my fingertips. My head is light and I feel like throwing up. I hope I don’t; getting it all over a Unba would be a really bad idea. Second thought…
    No time for that. The woman, whose name-badge reads Sharein, has a firm grip on my arm as she drags me over to the building and inside. I barely catch a glimpse of a long, low, dark room with lots of equipment in it before I find myself at the end, where several desks and computer terminals are set up.
    “Two in just now,” Sharein says to the girl sitting behind one of the desks. The girl, about 17, looks up. I gasp. She’s stunningly beautiful; her eyes are blue, her hair is dark red, and her face highlighted by an intelligence that belies her age. Without looking at me, she rattles off a list of questions.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:13pm

     

    “Full name? Date of birth? Height and weight? Slum of origin?”
    “Tannith Emma Drifess, I turned 15 on May 3rd of this year, I’m 5 feet 4 inches and I weigh 115 pounds. And I’m from Slum 22#.”
    She looks up suddenly, her face tinging a slight pink. Her expression shows a slight amount of actual interest; more than most Unba show, anyway.
    “Slum 22#? Bordering the Unknown?”
    “Yes.” I shift my weight nervously, wondering why all the questions? What is this place, anyway? A prison? A school?


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:13pm

     

    Her features narrow. “Typical border idget,” she mumbles to herself. Then she jerks her head toward a door behind her. “Get her checked out. We don’t want her passing out on the point. And,” her eyes stop at my cloth-wrapped hand, “patch her up. Top physical condition absolutely necessary.”
    With those cryptic words buzzing through my head, Sharein jerks me into the other room. It’s small, about the size of my bedroom, with a body-scanner in one corner, a tray of instruments, and all the look of an examine room.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:13pm

     

    “Up here,” Sharein directs, and I step onto the circular stand. She quickly goes through an examination, typing everything in on an electronic data-pad. Meanwhile, lights and buttons are flickering on the display panel opposite me. A screen shows the skeletal system of my body, highlighting the hand with the glass in it. Sharein notes it with a whistle.
    “Cutting up, I see,” she remarks snidely. “Put your hand here.” She pulls a tray with a blinking surface over. It looks like one of those new safety-removal outlets that Jonas talked about last week.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:14pm

     

    I place my hand on the flat metallic tray, and watch as the glass inside my hand is melted and sucked out, leaving no marks. My hand tingles a little, but is otherwise unaffected.
    “Now put these on,” Sharein orders, pulling some clothes out of a locker.
    Reluctantly, I strip off my normal clothes and slip into the dark red jumper. The long sleeves fit me perfectly, and the collar is snug around my neck. I slip into shiny black boots, tucking my pant-legs into the flexible leather. Then Sharein pulls the rubber-band from my hair and places me in a chair.


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:14pm

     

    “What are you doing?” I ask, startled into speech for once.
    “Cutting your hair,” she says, eying the red strands with a scowl. “I’ve never seen a human with that color before. Not a half-breed, I hope,” she smirks.
    “No!” I shout, but not at the half-breed comment. “You can’t cut my hair! I like it long!” I jump up and instantly get shoved back down.
    “Sit down, idget,” Sharein says tersely. “It’ll grow back.” She flicks a switch on the control panel and the hair-cutting appliance opens from the wall, blades already grinding. I flinch at the sound but keep silent as my waist-length hair is shortened to just above my shoulders. Sharein pulls it back into a tight braid and reties it.
    “Perfect,” she says, adding with a scoff, “If anything about you humans can be perfect, that is.”


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:14pm

     

    I look at myself in the shiny metal of the wall. I feel like crying. It’s silly, I know, but I hate the way I look. Short hair! My dad—and Jonas—always said they liked my hair the way it was. Now they won’t!
    “Stop blubbering.” Sharein pulls my arm. “Get into the scanner. Let’s see if you’re really the helpless little girl you act like.”
    I wasn’t crying, I think to myself, but I ignore her comment and step into the metal tube. It’s open on both ends, and there’s a little rolling belt that takes you through it. Sharein turns the belt on and I slide through. The machine makes a buzzing noise at one point.
    “What have we here?” I hear her voice from outside. “Oho, a necklace? Family heirloom, I’ll bet. Take it off and hand it out.”


  • ftu on January 5th, 2013 - 7:15pm

     

    I reach inside my collar and undo the metal clasp. It’s my mother’s, the only one I have of her’s. I wonder what Sharein will do with it. I don’t think I want to find out.
    The belt pushes me out the other end, where she’s standing. I’m holding the necklace in one hand, reaching out to give it to her.


  • Yelsew on January 9th, 2013 - 9:23am

     

    Great job!! But I don’t get that last paragraph? Will it be explained in your next continuation? Other than that it’s awesome, do you think you’ll get it published? :)
    Wes :) ;) :D .


  • ftu on January 11th, 2013 - 6:05pm

     

    AH! They cut a part out! Okay, maybe doing stuff like what was s’posed to happen in Mason’s dream is too old for this. Knew it! :( It didn’t post the end of the segment, it does that a lot. I’ll hafta post it over again…sigh…oh, well. ;) Glad you’re liking it, Wes. :D *imitates Zaphod Beeblebrox voice* I do it just for you.

    Lol, not really. ;)

    FearTheUnknown 8-)


  • ftu on January 11th, 2013 - 6:08pm

     

    Suddenly, I swing the chain around and bring the pendant, a pebble-sized ruby, against her face with a smack. She’s taken off-guard by the impact and stumbles back a step. That’s all the time I need. I lunge past the circular stand, trip over a cable, and slam against the door. My hands grab the handle and yank, but just then I feel hands grabbing me back.


  • ftu on January 11th, 2013 - 6:09pm

     

    “Oh, no, you won’t,” Sharein hisses. A sharp pain shoots through me and I scream. I squirm around to see an odd-shaped, pen-like object in her hand. A stun-gun, like Marshall’s.


  • ftu on January 11th, 2013 - 6:09pm

     

    “Stop, please,” I beg. She applies the stun several more times, jerking my body with its sharp current. I scream, but not loudly. My throat is closing up and my limbs tingle. I can’t move. When she finishes, I’m paralyzed, unable to move or even cry.


  • ftu on January 11th, 2013 - 6:09pm

     

    Sharein laughs. “I told you, Tannith. If you don’t do what we say, you get zapped. And even if you do—well—you’ll see.” She laughs again and yanks me to my feet. I’d scream, but I can’t find my voice.
    “Let’s get going, human.” She shoves me out the door. I take one last look at my mother’s necklace, lying unnoticed on the floor. The ruby pendant is shattered.


  • ftu on January 11th, 2013 - 6:10pm

     

    P.S. Yeah, I’ll probably publish it–if I ever finish it! ;) It’s coming really slow right now. But I’m getting there. :D No fear, no retreat.
    FTU 8-)


  • ftu on February 4th, 2013 - 6:49pm

     

    I’m going to try a new method of doing this: numbering every comment, so that it’s less confusing if they don’t get moderated in the correct order. Hope it works. ;)
    FearTheUnknown 8-)


  • ftu on February 4th, 2013 - 6:50pm

     

    (1)
    I slowly come awake, opening my eyes with a hope that I’ll see something that reminds me of home.
    The ceiling is a foot from my nose; it’s a gray, cracked, concrete ceiling. I wince, remembering the events of last night, hoping and praying it’s just all a dream.
    But it isn’t. With a sigh, I roll onto my side and stare miserably at the girl across the aisle from me.
    I’m in a long, high room. It’s dark, but the kind of dark like the light is just beyond a curtained window. There are no windows here. Only rows and rows of metal three-stack bunks and a girl on each mattress. They’re hard as rocks, but I barely feel it. My arms and legs still are numb from last night.
    Last night. What a nightmare.


  • ftu on February 5th, 2013 - 2:39pm

     

    (2)
    After Sharein dragged me out of the examination room, she took me through another door in the main room to a long hallway. This led to a maze of hallways, lifts, security checkpoints, and more scanners. I was so dazed I barely remember it now. When we reached this bunk room, she pushed me through the door, said “Row 7 on left, top bunk,” and then left me. I was too tired to even think about escaping, so I followed her directions and climbed up. Everyone else was asleep by then, though I think I woke up sometime last night when another girl came in.


  • ftu on February 6th, 2013 - 6:41pm

     

    (3)
    I wonder where Mason is. Is he stuck in a room with a bunch of other guys? Marshall said something about finishing him. Does he mean killing him? I wouldn’t put it past these Unba. They have no respect for life, human or otherwise. It’s not something I like to think about, but now, lying all alone, kidnapped and miles from home, I begin to wish I had learned more about the Unba and what they do. It might have helped me steer clear of this.


  • ftu on February 7th, 2013 - 2:53pm

     

    (4)
    An alarm suddenly sounds. Lights flick on, blinding me for a second.
    “Wake-up call, all human scum get their crummy existences out’o bed!” the girl beneath me hollers out. The room descends into a whirl of commotion as everyone jumps up (several whacking their heads on the ceiling) and roll off their bunks. Everyone is talking, making my head ache with the chatter. I wait until my two bunk-mates move off, then climb stiffly down and stretch my limbs. I peer into the aisle and nearly get run-over by a heavy-set girl as she dashes past. What’s the rush, I wonder. I look both ways, then step out and follow her. Seems everyone’s gathering at the further end of the room, opposite where I came in. There’s a large group of girls lined up in front of a door on one side, with several more cowering on the other side. I come up just in time to hear—
    “If you don’t want to get beat-up, don’t step over the lines.”


  • ftu on February 8th, 2013 - 6:31pm

     

    (5)
    Then they all look at me with surprised expressions. I stop, uncertain what’s going on.
    “So, we have a black-list prospect in our midst.” The girl who was talking earlier steps forward and looks me up and down. “What’s your name?”
    “Tannith.” I look her in the eye. “Who are you?” She’s a human, so I’m not afraid of her. Besides, she’s about Naomi’s size. I could take her on if she attacked me, which I hope she won’t. Funny I now think about stuff like that. Being with the Unba will do that to you.
    “Huh. Not the usual scum the Unba pick up,” she says with a toss of her head. “I’m Britt. I’m the leader here, and you’ll do what I say. If you don’t—” she draws a finger across her throat. I swallow hard and nod. Picture gotten.


  • ftu on February 12th, 2013 - 7:51pm

     

    (6)
    “For all you newcomers,” she nods to me and the few others, “you’re in a Unba prison—or training school, take your pick.” She talks in a slightly bored voice like she’s teaching a group of five-year-olds. “They’ve never told us the name, but crazy people like us make our own.” She pauses for effect and gives a mock bow. “Welcome to the Loony Bin of Unba Rejects…or perhaps you’d prefer—Bloody Asylum.”
    “Tell her what it means,” a spiteful voice calls from the crowd.
    Britt looks nervous for a second, then quickly gives a rough laugh. “She’ll find out soon enough. Now get in line. It’s time to head out.”


  • ftu on February 18th, 2013 - 6:27pm

     

    (7)
    The little group of newcomers, me included, hurriedly line up. Britt walks down the row and pushes some of the unruly girls into rigid attention. I’m on the end, and when she reaches me, she stops.
    “Tannith Drifess?”
    “You know my last name?” I ask, surprised.
    “Yeah.” She glances around, suddenly nervous, her voice near a whisper. “Look, just watch yourself, got it? You made a major mistake back there: arriving late to roll-call. They’re watching all the time.”
    “Is that what you meant by black-list?” I ask, equally low in voice.
    “Part of it.” She licks her lips and I realize how pale her face is under some faint scars. “All right, now move out,” she says loudly. She can switch from nervous to tough in a second. With hands on her hips, she says, “Late-comers won’t get breakfast. So move it!” These last words are punctuated by shoving me so that I ram into the back of the girl in front of me. Britt walks back up the line, shouting and threatening as everyone moves out the doors and down a hallway.


  • ftu on February 19th, 2013 - 8:38pm

     

    (8)
    I look around and see security cameras lining the walls. This place has more surveillance than I’ve ever seen before. It is a prison, as Britt said. She scares me. One minute trying to help, the next treating me like the dirt-bag all the Unba think I am. Just what’s up with her? I try not to think about it. Instead, I focus on how Jonas and Naomi are going to break me out of here soon. They will, I know it. With Lloyd helping them, I’m not going to be in here much longer.


  • ftu on March 1st, 2013 - 6:33pm

     

    (9)
    My thoughts disappear as we march into a cafeteria, like the kind in a normal school. There are metal tables with benches lining the room all the way to the end, which has another door. Along one side of the room is a buffet with filled trays. We all file past and take one, then find the next empty seat at a table and sit down. I feel starved; I didn’t get supper last night, and being scared always makes me hungry. Forget scared; I’m terrified! All the stuff Britt said back in the bunk room keeps running through my head. Bloody Asylum—my blood is starting to pump like crazy through my veins.
    I look down the line of girls. All of them are dressed like me, in red jumpers with short hair braided back. Short hair! I fell like crying again when I think of my haircut last night. Silly, I know, but—


  • phaeton on March 18th, 2013 - 4:54pm

     

    (10)
    “Hey, move over, half-breed.”
    The voice jolts me out of my thoughts. I look up to see Britt standing over me, tray in hand. She’s scowling, so I quickly scoot over. She sits down, but before she can say anything, I blurt out, “I’m not a half-breed.”
    She gives me a look and says sarcastically, “Haven’t you heard that it’s practically unheard-of for humans to have red hair?”
    “I can’t help! My dad was red-haired. It’s a family thing!” I feel defensive now. “Look, just because I don’t look like a human doesn’t mean I’m not one!”
    I didn’t know my voice could carry so far. All the girls at the nearby tables turn and look at me. I blush blood-red at their stares. I wish I hadn’t said anything.
    “Black-list prospect,” someone snorts, and everyone laughs. Britt frowns.
    “Lay off her,” she snaps. “She’ll get what’s coming later.”


  • ftu on March 20th, 2013 - 2:04pm

     

    (11)
    I don’t think Britt likes me very much, but it’s obvious that the other girls annoy her as well. I have to find out what they mean by “black-list prospect”. So I turn to the girl on my other side. She’s still staring at me, mouth open. I blush again, but this time I feel angry.
    “What’s so big about being a black-list prospect?” I ask.
    Her mouth moves, but she seems to have trouble getting sound out. Her eyes are getting bigger and bigger, and finally out comes a thin, squeaky voice. “You’re—you’re Tannith Drifess, aren’t you?”
    I stare at her. “How do you know me?”
    “I’m Shea—from Mason’s building—remember?”
    “What? Shea? You mean” —I gulp— “you’re the one who disappeared? Yes, I remember you now! But that was years ago. How’d you end up here?”
    “Same as you, I guess,” Shea says. Her voice is starting to sound more normal now. “I didn’t recognize you for a minute. But when you said about your dad being red-haired—I remembered.”


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